Improved Script

I changed the script as it was too long. This was because in order for the audience for feel emotion form the voice over, Soraya had to say it slowly and with emotion. This meant that it would not fit in the time gap. Also, I shortened the script as I did not like parts of it as I felt that they weren't necessary and from the feedback, people wanted the voice over to start later on in the opening scene rather than starting when the opening scene does. This meant that I had to shorten the script down to improve the opening scene.